Good home videos and memories of your hunts.
Now I am far from a photographer, I hardly take stills of my own hunts. But just an opinion,
Some parts were shakey.
Were you got the double in the field a mike on the person would be better then from the recorder, since wind played a part of the distortion.
Video a little on the dark side in parts.
Commend you on your skills though to get a film with kids and all.
The ones with the kids was enjoyable to watch especially you talking them still and then the shooter taking a lot of the tree out.